This term for literacy we have been working on writing narrative stories.
I was focusing on paragraphs and becoming the character. Here’s a sample of a story I wrote called The Grandparents. I really enjoyed writing it as I got to tell it from the perspective of a 5 year old. My next step would be to describe the excitement of the narrator as she opens the door.
Here’s the sample:
Finally the doorbell rings once again. I rush to the door and immediately hug the people there. I’m so happy to see my grandparents! Then I realise I’m actually hugging the letterman. He gives a very boring looking letter to me, addressed to Abigail King, and quickly hurries off.
I’m really disappointed and pretend to act out SparkleButt the baby zebra when she thinks there’s no way out of the mermaid kingdom from Baby Animal Island. I sing the song she sings, and look as disappointed as I can. I think I’m very good at singing, I’m going to be a singer when I grow up! And I’m going to marry Mum and Dad and then we can all live together forever and eat honey on the moon! Oh wait. I’m meant to be disappointed. Oops.
Mum walks over to me and asks me what’s wrong. I continue singing my sad song and walk past my mum, pretending she doesn’t exist like SparkleButt does. I walk around the house singing, so, so sad. I will never be happy again. Then the doorbell rings again.
Yay!